Sunday, February 12, 2006

What does newyork city have to offer? -

I am writing a personal narrative about how i enjoy going to new york..i need ideas of what makes it SO great. my intro is ... picture this. tall buildings towering over you, bright lights and strange aromas that fill the air. Your in new york the city that never sleeps. new york has so much to offer when it comes to the reastraunts. seeing my family.. and going to the amusement parks. how do i make it personal and how do i make it intriguing

Tell the reader what they don t know about New York. The things that you know from the ground up.Getting up to move your car because of alternate side of the street parking. . Tell the alphabet soup we speak The FDR, The LIE, The BQE,the A,C,E,F,M,R ,123 lines. How about how the city pushes you. Pushes you out of its way when youre daydreaming in its path,or pushes you down when you act like a quitter or pushes you to run faster and further than you ever thought you could because you refuse to get left behind.Tell how every borough is like a city of its own, every neighborhood like a county, every block like a town and how if there are 2 of anything one of them is in New York. City that never sleeps ? tell them what its doing up all night. Not just the clubbing,the Con Ed guys sweating in t shirts at 3 am from the steam comming out of the manhole while everybody else is wrapped up against an artic blast. See what I mean ? New York the port city whos life is moved by the tide of the will of the people who live and work here.Nobody gets everything but everybody gets something. Good luck

It is not what New York has to offer you, it is what you can offer to New York. Say you like the stage, it is all there. Movies, modeling, education,culture, diversity it is all here. It is not so much the buildings and the lights as it is the dreams and hopes.. Years ago, people came to NYC from the old world and found that what was offered was a Chance to build on their dreams.It is a city of tremendous financial power and political influence and ofcoarse, history. All of the rich histories of New York make it all the more alluring.